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February 4, 2013

James asks…

How’s it? Easy 10 points? visit here….?

I sat by the door, listening to the fast footsteps that arrived closer and closer. I didn’t know what I was thinking when I accepted the invitation from the stranger. His gracious face, sparkling sapphire eyes, cascading curls of luxuriant bronze hair and at last his warm smile drew me nearer and nearer until I reached this deserted house. Twelve years passed since he left me here, all alone without saying a single word.

Administrator answers:

Wow that is excellent. If you wrote this yourself, I must say I’m impressed!

Sandra asks…

Good eyeshadow that actually lasts?

I’m looking for good (bronze colored) eye shadow (I’m african american). I’m trying to go for a natural-ish look, but I still want it to make my eys sparkle, a little. I’ve been using a bronze color on my eyes for a while now, but it always seems to wear off after about an hour. Does anyone know of some good quality eyeshadow, that won’t wear off.

Administrator answers:

Almost any eyeshadow will last all day of you use a good primer. Revlon has an affordable eyeshadow primer.
I would suggest the color “woodwinked” from MAC it is a lovely bronze/gold color that stays on very long, its very pigmented.

Carol asks…

What does Michael Shepherd’s poem mean?

We are like salmon, swimming back upstream;
Leaping against waterfalls that thwart,
Cut and bruised; but strong; our only dream
Return to source; no thought save source of thought;
And in that fight, our iron age turns to bronze,
And we to heroes, in a war of soul,
As nature seeks the nature it had once;
Though wholly lost, remembering the whole.
We silver salmon, sparkling as the sun
Shines on our fierce and loving enterprise:
To rear our children where the world is one;
The source remembered, nature’s greatest prize.
The golden age is ageless in its gleam
And we, like salmon, swimming back upstream.

Administrator answers:

The stream is a metaphor for life, and the progression of ages a sort of literary vehicle, if not metaphor, then allegory, for our “progress” toward our goal, which is to return to our origin.

Where did you get this? Can you add some of your own thoughts in the comments section?

David asks…

make-up tips for my wedding…..?

i just recently ordered shimmering bronze lotion and make up for my wedding.i really want that sparkling glow for my wedding.im a almond colored african american women.do you guys have any tips on those kind of products.i want to look natural not like a bronze statue

Administrator answers:

Physicians formula has a nice variety of bronzers in powder form. I would be careful usoing a lotion bronzer to close to your wedding date as itmay not be what you want. Aveeno has a nice moisturizer that leaves a nice shimmer on your skin, with a very light bronzer in it, it is really nice and subtle. Keep your makeup simple, but play up your best feature a bit, ie your eyes. Also keep your hairstyle as simple as possible, you want people and your fiance to be looking at your happy face, not an elaborate hair style.Good luck and many happy years ahead.

John asks…

More about Ezekiel?

I don’t believe in God or or that aliens came to earth, but this is weird?
As I looked, behold, a stormy wind came out of the north, and a
great cloud, with brightness round about it, and fire flashing
forth continually, and in the midst of the fire, as it were
gleaming bronze. And from the midst of it came the likeness of four
living creatures. And this was their appearance: they had the form
of men, but each had four faces, and each had four wings. Their
legs were straight, and the soles of their feet were like the sole
of a calf’s foot; and they sparkled like burnished bronze. Under
the wings on their four sides they had human hands. And the four
had their faces and their wings thus: their wings touched one
another; they went straightforward, without turning as they went

Administrator answers:

People back then described things as they saw it.It could have been anything.

Chris asks…

My emotions right now make me feel like….?

a sparkling purple butterfly, with wings of a black velvet and creamy lavender swirl, soaring effortlessly on natural thermal wind currents through a glade of fruitful aspen trees, and illuminated by the incandescent rays of a scarlet-bronze sunset outlined with the silhouettes of sinewy nimbus clouds above the imposing, snowcapped peaks of a glorious, illustrious mountain range.

But that’s just me. How about you?

Administrator answers:

My emotions make me feel like a princess spinning around in her castle but realizing it was cluttered with a bit of thoughts. But she calmly swept them away.

Betty asks…

Repost…..How’s my short story…….True answer 10 points?

This is my short story.
1- tell me how it is
2-tell me how to improve (constructive critisism)
3-It has to be 500 words but it exceeds the word limit by 100 words so how to make it short

I sat by the door, listening to the fast footsteps that arrived closer and closer. I didn’t know what I was thinking when I accepted the invitation from him. His gracious face, sparkling sapphire eyes, cascading curls of luxuriant bronze hair and at last his warm smile drew me closer and closer until I reached this deserted house. Years had passed since he left me here, all alone. Everything, almost my life started again on 1st January, 1994. I was born again in a new life when I met him, Albert. Near “Rozz” restaurant, he stood surrounded by hot, sexy girls with bright bikinis, mini dresses and skirts. He looked perfect in his thin white t-shirt that showed the traced of his six packs and black jeans. At the corner I stood in a long flowery summer dress. I wasn’t a good looking girl that the guys will admire and faint when they see me but I had average looks with pale skin, shiny black hair that is always up in a bun and bright black eyes like a cat. I should’ve known this wouldn’t happen, Albert and I together but I lost my heart to him, the moment I met his magnetic eyes that pulled me towards him. Gracefully, his hands took mine and I could feel jealousy looking eyes onto me.

“Wanna date, babe?” he whispered as he slowly kissed me from my neck to cheeks. Before I could answer, our lips interlocked a long, unbreathable kiss. I could taste sweet candy on his bright red lips.

“Um….”I sighed. “I have a boyfriend already” I said avoiding his eyes.

“That’s it…I thought you were going to say that you were a vampire like twilight…Just a boyfriend, so what?” he asked. “I have girlfriend too” he said pointing to a group.

Without sounding unduly curious, “Which one?” I asked, searching for the most beautiful girl in that group.

“Which one?” he said with mock astonishment as he laughed a rough but lovable one. “All of them, dear” he said lifting my chin up. Our gaze met and he tightened his grip on my hips.

“Wanna date?” he repeated with a controlled smile as we waited for my answer. I looked down again, unsure of what to say. I didn’t want to betray my boyfriend who I had been with for 6 months but I also didn’t want to miss my golden opportunity.

“Yes” I agreed with a sense of guilt.

We were a happy couple for a couple of months. He even arranged a party to meet his family and I accepted his invitation. And here I am, in this deserted house which I couldn’t leave as I get lost every time I escape. Albert, I hate this name, I hate him. I learnt my lesson now that I should always look for good hearts and not for good looks.

I had been a real stupid to leave my beloved boyfriend, James. He loved me so much and I did too.
The footsteps arrived much closer now and to my surprise, it was James.

“James” I cried as I ran and hugged him. “I missed you.”

He pushed me against the wall and dragged a dead body.

“I thought that you would miss Albert as well…so here you go” he laid the body in front of me.

“You…you killed him…it was all you…you put me here for…”

“your betrayal, honey” he said. “I let you together for 6 months to show the pain that I suffered…and now it’s all over…oh no…going to be over” he said as he came towards me with a sharp knife.

I closed my eyes in fear and IT NEVER OPENED.

Administrator answers:

That’s an interesting story, there are a few errors though.

- Like the “IT NEVER OPENED” it should really be “they never opened” and probably not in Caps.

- The part that says “dragged a dead body” would sound better if you replaced dead with “lifeless” or something similar.

- “learnt” should probably be learned

Otherwise this story looks nice and the world limit probably wouldn’t be that much of an issue, if it is, replace the description of the girls with “awfully good-looking” or something else and/ or replace “Albert” with Jim or something shorter, it shortens it by at least 15 letters.

Michael asks…

BEST ANSWER 10 POINTS – ROMANCE SHORT STORY?

Repost…..How’s my short story…….True answer 10 points?
This is my short story.
1- tell me how it is
2-tell me how to improve (constructive critisism)
3-It has to be 500 words but it exceeds the word limit by 100 words so how to make it short

I sat by the door, listening to the fast footsteps that arrived closer and closer. I didn’t know what I was thinking when I accepted the invitation from him. His gracious face, sparkling sapphire eyes, cascading curls of luxuriant bronze hair and at last his warm smile drew me closer and closer until I reached this deserted house. Years had passed since he left me here, all alone. Everything, almost my life started again on 1st January, 1994. I was born again in a new life when I met him, Albert. Near “Rozz” restaurant, he stood surrounded by hot, sexy girls with bright bikinis, mini dresses and skirts. He looked perfect in his thin white t-shirt that showed the traced of his six packs and black jeans. At the corner I stood in a long flowery summer dress. I wasn’t a good looking girl that the guys will admire and faint when they see me but I had average looks with pale skin, shiny black hair that is always up in a bun and bright black eyes like a cat. I should’ve known this wouldn’t happen, Albert and I together but I lost my heart to him, the moment I met his magnetic eyes that pulled me towards him. Gracefully, his hands took mine and I could feel jealousy looking eyes onto me.

“Wanna date, babe?” he whispered as he slowly kissed me from my neck to cheeks. Before I could answer, our lips interlocked a long, unbreathable kiss. I could taste sweet candy on his bright red lips.

“Um….”I sighed. “I have a boyfriend already” I said avoiding his eyes.

“That’s it…I thought you were going to say that you were a vampire like twilight…Just a boyfriend, so what?” he asked. “I have girlfriend too” he said pointing to a group.

Without sounding unduly curious, “Which one?” I asked, searching for the most beautiful girl in that group.

“Which one?” he said with mock astonishment as he laughed a rough but lovable one. “All of them, dear” he said lifting my chin up. Our gaze met and he tightened his grip on my hips.

“Wanna date?” he repeated with a controlled smile as we waited for my answer. I looked down again, unsure of what to say. I didn’t want to betray my boyfriend who I had been with for 6 months but I also didn’t want to miss my golden opportunity.

“Yes” I agreed with a sense of guilt.

We were a happy couple for a couple of months. He even arranged a party to meet his family and I accepted his invitation. And here I am, in this deserted house which I couldn’t leave as I get lost every time I escape. Albert, I hate this name, I hate him. I learnt my lesson now that I should always look for good hearts and not for good looks.

I had been a real stupid to leave my beloved boyfriend, James. He loved me so much and I did too.
The footsteps arrived much closer now and to my surprise, it was James.

“James” I cried as I ran and hugged him. “I missed you.”

He pushed me against the wall and dragged a dead body.

“I thought that you would miss Albert as well…so here you go” he laid the body in front of me.

“You…you killed him…it was all you…you put me here for…”

“your betrayal, honey” he said. “I let you together for 6 months to show the pain that I suffered…and now it’s all over…oh no…going to be over” he said as he came towards me with a sharp knife.

I closed my eyes in fear and THEY NEVER OPENED.

Administrator answers:

Your tenses class: wasn’t a good looking girl that the guys will admire and faint – “will” should be “would” and so on.
Everything, almost my life started again on 1st January, 1994 – awkward sentence.
Misspelled jealous or reword that sentence.
How is shiny black hair and cat like eyes with a spark of mischief (which is how that looks) average at all?
[interlocked IN a long... Etc]

Your timeline doesn’t add up. Twilight came out in the 2000, but according to your story, she met him in 1994. The popular vamps of that time were done by Anne Rice. For niche and little known Poppy K. Brite’s Lost Souls.
[as he laughed a rough but lovable one] drop “a” and “one” and add a comma.
[had been a real stupid] drop “a”
Ending:
“let” should be “left”.
Numbers between 1-10 should be written out. Numbers after – free for all.
[He pushed me against the wall and dragged a dead body.] bit confusing.

Overall, I think the story is pretty good, and the premise is interesting. You can sut down on some of the adjectives in the first paragraph. We know Albert’s good looking, so when you say his hair cascades we assume it’s also luxuriant, etc.

Some questions though:
Where does the knife come from? His pocket?
Why was she in the deserted building to begin with? If James is behind it all, why would she assume she was there for Albert?
Why did she not break up with her boyfriend? Did she break up with him?
When does this story take place? The 90s or 00s or 10s?
Why did she enter the DESERTED house to begin with?

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