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June 18, 2013

Ken asks…

Does this poem sound like it’s about Edward Cullen from Twilight?

I wrote this poem, because I love guys that can play the piano/guitar, and honestly, “meadows” are nothing new in romance stories.

Honestly, I don’t like Edward Cullen…it’s for the fans :)
(and I realize that his eyes are apparently “golden” and not sapphire.)
******

Fingers that gracefully dance across the black and white keys
Eyelashes that flutter above sparkling sapphire eyes

Sing to me my lullaby
Your voice like an angelic choir
Let me gaze upon your chiseled face
No need to constrain your desire

Lie with me in the meadow
The long luxurious blades of grass
Glistening like the strands of your
Bronze hair, long and unkempt perfection

Hands that grasp and naturally intertwine with mine
You cradle and hold me, we share butterfly kisses as I peaceably sigh

But alas, the dream sequence quickly ends
You are only figment of my imagination
A fantasy that will forever be unreal and remain
Never becoming a reality
For when I realized that man that I kissed
Such men like my dreams, just don’t exist

Why can’t you be real for just one more night
And tenderly gaze and me and tell me I’m your only light

(So with a broken heart I bitterly abstain from all romantic indulgences…)
FYI, the poem wasn’t originally about Edward Cullen. Someone just mentioned to me that it sounds like it is. :)

Administrator answers:

WOW, that’s a really good poem, It does sound like a twilight thing but if it’s not, it’s not.
I write poems to and well some sound like there twilight too, but there not. Well, Just a suggestion, If you write poems alot, I have a website, (it’s free) you should look at it, I just made it so there are only two poems on it, but if you like it and would like to make one, send me a message, I would be more than happy to tell you how to make one.
~Maria~

Michael asks…

Does this poem sound too much like “Twilight”?

I wrote this poem, because I love guys that can play the piano/guitar, and honestly, “meadows” are nothing new in romance stories.

Honestly, I don’t like Edward Cullen…it’s for the fans :)

******

Fingers that gracefully dance across the black and white keys
Eyelashes that flutter above sparkling sapphire eyes

Sing to me my lullaby
Your voice like an angelic choir
Let me gaze upon your chiseled face
No need to constrain your desire

Lie with me in the meadow
The long luxurious blades of grass
Glistening like the strands of your
Bronze hair, long and unkempt perfection

Hands that grasp and naturally intertwine with mine
You cradle and hold me, we share butterfly kisses as I peaceably sigh

But alas, the dream sequence quickly ends
You are only figment of my imagination
A fantasy that will forever be unreal and remain
Never becoming a reality
For when I realized that man that I kissed
Such men like my dreams, just don’t exist

Why can’t you be real for just one more night
And tenderly gaze and me and tell me I’m your only light

(So with a broken heart I bitterly abstain from all romantic indulgences…)

Administrator answers:

Twilight
Summer Highlight
to girls of 14
to me
just a B-rated
Screening
of a book
that read
dull

all I can say is I like the imagery, but that movie, bleh, devote your talent to more meaningful cinema.

Paul asks…

EASY POINTS!!!!!!!!please!!!?

Okay, now I do NOT want to hear ANYTHING about twilight, alright? Now I am writing a book, its about a girl(that thinks she is not pretty but she is beautiful, sparkling green eyes, dark brown curly hair and slim.) from texas moving to Hammond, oregon, she meets a boy (with inhuman Beautiful-ness, dark bronze hair, golden/black eyes, and slim but Strong, he is secretly a vampire, his power is to mimic other people’s powers.) Now I need a little help on what the girl and boy’s last name and first name should be. Thank you for the help. BTW I love twilight, i have read all the books, but it is very annoying when people tell me I am copying it.
and THIS IS NOTHING LIKE TWILIGHT!
People, this book has nothing! i said NOTHING in common with twilight, she does not have a werewolf for a best friend she has a wizard for a best friend! and what if she does not choose the vampire what if she is in love with the wizard! people PLEASE!!!!! don’t talk about twilight, Thank you!

Administrator answers:

Mary Sue and Stu too. I suggest you cut back on their gorgeousness and come up with some character flaws. And for the love of god is the girl is beautiful just let her think so. It’s so damn annoying when characters that are clearly gorgeous have to mope around complaining about how they aren’t.

Anne and Henry.

Carol asks…

How is this poem? ?

The wind ruffled through his bronze hair
His face so close to mine.
How many times have I seen this face?
Yet,i can never get used to its shine

His marble-like skin sparkling like diamonds
Can anything be so fine?
As i sit here with this god-like creature
I fail to believe that he is all mine

Slowly,his lips form my favorite crooked smile
And he spoke my name in his wind-chime voice
His beauty too much to bear,
My heart recoilled

As i tried to control my heart beat
and tried to think clearly,
He layed his ear to my heart
And said that he loved me

Administrator answers:

Stop copying Twilight and get your own material.

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